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O brown brook, O blithe brook, what will you say to me
If I take off my heavy shoon and wade you childishly?

      O take them off, and come to me.
      You shall not fall.  Step merrily!

But, cool brook, but, quick brook, and what if I should float
White-bodied in your pleasant pool, your bubbles at my throat?

      If you are but a mortal maid,
      Then I shall make you half afraid.
      The water shall be dim and deep,
      And silver fish shall lunge and leap
      About you, coward mortal thing.
      But if you come desiring
      To win once more your naiadhood,
      How you shall laugh and find me good—
      My golden surfaces, my glooms,
      My secret grottoes’ dripping rooms,
      My depths of warm wet emerald,
      My mosses floating fold on fold!
      And where I take the rocky leap
      Like wild white water shall you sweep;
      Like wild white water shall you cry,
      Trembling and turning to the sky,
      While all the thousand-fringèd trees
      Glimmer and glisten through the breeze.
      I bid you come!  Too long, too long,
      You have forgot my undersong.
      And this perchance you never knew:
      E’en I, the brook, have need of you.
      My naiads faded long ago,—
      My little nymphs, that to and fro
      Within my waters sunnily
      Made small white flames of tinkling glee.
      I have been lonesome, lonesome; yea,
      E’en I, the brook, until this day.
      Cast off your shoon; ah, come to me,
      And I will love you lingeringly!

O wild brook, O wise brook, I cannot come, alas!
I am but mortal as the leaves that flicker, float, and pass.
My body is not used to you; my breath is fluttering sore;
You clasp me round too icily.  Ah, let me go once more!
Would God I were a naiad-thing whereon Pan’s music blew;
But woe is me! you pagan brook, I cannot stay with you!

Notes

From The Little Book of Modern Verse | 1913

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  • mermaid7
    February 1, 2007

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    NAIAD - Greek Mythology One of the nymphs who lived in and presided over brooks, springs, and fountains.
    An invitation of the sweetest kind! This is a type of invitation to become a mermaid of sorts. By responding with a yes, the brook would reveal all of its secrets to her. Um, and the brook states that it is lonesome. Wonderful blend of mythology, allusion and personification.

  • rhondasail
    January 31, 2007

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    A wild ride!

    "Woe is me!" She has not the courage to take such a leap. The spirit is willing, but the flesh is weak. I like this poem, it soothes me somehow. Makes me want to find this cool, quick brook and see for myself if it still bubbles past in loneliness. On the 'surface' it is just about a refreshing swim in the brook, but of course we see the deeper meaning hidden in the words 'pagan' and 'naiad-thing', that show the prejudices she tries to hide, ('Oh, BROWN brook'), those she considers childish. Ah, what joys we miss when we close our minds and heart to others.