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A Lake And A Fairy Boat

A lake and a fairy boat
To sail in the moonlight clear, -
And merrily we would float
From the dragons that watch us here!

Thy gown should be snow-white silk
And strings of oriental pearls,
Like gossamers dipped in milk,
Should twine with thy raven curls!

Red rubies should deck thy hands,
And diamonds should be thy dower -
But fairies have broke their wands,
And wishing has lost its power!

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  • Nam
    October 5, 2004
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    .. oh and if 'twere I a little bee
    oh a buzz buzz would I flee ..

    stupid

    It has a lovely pattern and flow to it. It's short and lovely and all that other jazz .. scat scat scat ..


  • Scott Adelmann
    June 26, 2004
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    Very nice poem. A good deal of economy in the word choice - no wasted syllables in this one. Very nice.

    Scott

  • MeMySeLfaNdi16
    June 26, 2004
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    Wow this is very beautiful. I loved it! Great job! emily

  • LadyKarasu
    June 26, 2004
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    this is quite beautiful. Very fantastic, yet with a bit of human element.

  • Ladybug
    June 26, 2004
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    I am glad you promoted this one, for it does speak great truth and brings back the magic of good English in prose

    thanks Tina for promoting this beauty!
    Tamara


  • Ahkam Moderators member
    December 29, 2003
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    nice job

    "Red rubies should deck thy hands,
    And diamonds should be thy dower -
    But fairies have broke their wands,
    And wishing has lost its power! "

    Wooo!!!! this is a very funny nice song.
    i like it!

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