Old Black Jacko
Smokes tobacco
In his little pipe of clay.
Puff, puff, puff,
He never has enough
Though he smokes it all day.
But his lubra says, "Mine tink dat Jacky
Him shmoke plenty too much baccy."
Notes
lubra - wife*
In a published book
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It seems, to me, to be about a person, presumably a male, could be a female, don't think so however, that all they do all day is smoke tobacco and they don't do anything else.
That's what I got from this piece. I liked it, it had a voice, it spoke well, to me, and it's a nice piece that Dennis has written here.
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