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An Indian Love Song


He
Lift up the veils that darken the delicate moon
of thy glory and grace,
Withhold not, O love, from the night
of my longing the joy of thy luminous face,
Give me a spear of the scented keora
guarding thy pinioned curls,
Or a silken thread from the fringes
that trouble the dream of thy glimmering pearls;
Faint grows my soul with thy tresses' perfume
and the song of thy anklets' caprice,
Revive me, I pray, with the magical nectar
that dwells in the flower of thy kiss.

She

How shall I yield to the voice of thy pleading,
how shall I grant thy prayer,
Or give thee a rose-red silken tassel,
a scented leaf from my hair?
Or fling in the flame of thy heart's desire the veils that cover my face,
Profane the law of my father's creed for a foe
of my father's race?
Thy kinsmen have broken our sacred altars and slaughtered our sacred kine,
The feud of old faiths and the blood of old battles sever thy people and mine.

He

What are the sins of my race, Beloved,
what are my people to thee?
And what are thy shrines, and kine and kindred,
what are thy gods to me?
Love recks not of feuds and bitter follies,
of stranger, comrade or kin,
Alike in his ear sound the temple bells
and the cry of the muezzin.
For Love shall cancel the ancient wrong
and conquer the ancient rage,
Redeem with his tears the memoried sorrow
that sullied a bygone age.

Notes

Pictured is the Keora, a powerfully sweet smelling flower.

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  • September 8, 2007
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    Confirmation

    From guest natali (contact)
    Is this poetry caprice of sarojini naidu????


  • June 10, 2007
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    Nice

    From guest Ushmita Singhal (contact)
    It`s a good poem and I like it.


  • April 11, 2007
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    Poetry form

    From guest Jim (contact)
    This is a very good poem. I was wondering though what form is this poem written in? When I say what form I mean like blank verse or free verse, etc.


  • Flaming Rose
    January 30, 2007
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    Wow

    Majnific picture of Love through the eyes of another culture of people. I love the phrase love shall cancel the ancient wrongs. Being in a multi-cultral marriage. This is truly the meaning of love.


  • January 1, 2007
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    From guest shivani (contact)
    a wonderful and a melodious poem. it touches the core of the heart.

  • Alilly
    April 18, 2006
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    I would hope this love story had a happy ending as that part is not too clear. Love shall cancel the ancient wrong- with that line I would venture to guess that it did. I do like how there are two parts to this poem (she and him). It gives it a greater understanding. Awesome love poem!


  • October 15, 2005
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    it is the best poem i have read it would be better if some discription about it in detail is given for people to understand it bettar

  • Pari Ali
    December 12, 2004
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    This poem is about a hindu girl and a muslim man I would guess, Of course there were many such love stories and even marriages. Emperor Akbar's marriage to Jodhabai is famous, not only did the emperor respect her religion but also built for her a palace in his fort in the Rajput style with a temple where she could worship. Sarojini Naidu is from Hyderabad and the very city has been built on a love story, that of a Qutb Shahi prince of Golconda who fell in love with a hindu village girl Bhagmati, and ultimately he married her and built a city where they had met. In Madhy Pradesh in the Vindhya mountains where the river Narmada flows. the walls of Mandu still echo with the love of poet prince Baz Bahadur for his Rani Roopmati.

    The last four lines I feel echo the idealist Indian philosophy of love conquering all, and no doubt more often than not it has been victorious in India helped by the tolerance, devoutedness, open heartedness and ability to forgive and move on that the Indians seem to have mastered. Oh we have our religious riots but most of these are politically motivated and through the ages we have seen the respect that people have had for each other, though the conguering hordes arrived again and again from the north west yet even as they settled on this soil so they changed in thought and temperament and grew more accepting and respectful.
    The great example is of the mongols who when they conquered the muslim world even tore babies out of their mothers stomachs, (ibn Athir) and wiped out entire populations yet when these barbarians settled in Persia and other places and accepted Islam they grew cultured yet the hunger of conquest still lived and Babar conquered India, In India they built palaces and gardens and stupendous monuments and cities. They learnt from Indians and Indian culture and Babar's grandson Emperor Akbar was famous for his tolerance and his son Jehangir for his justice as his grandson Shahjehan the builder of the Taj was famous not just for his immortal love story but also as a palace builder.
    The shringar or the adornment of women stay the same even now in these modern times, the tinkling bangles, the perfumed flowers worn in the hair, the silver anklets the kohled eyes, and for married women the red sindoor in the parting of their hair, and the marriage chain of gold and black beeds is a must.
    The customary dress of indian women has often been used in poems of course Sarojini Devi's light touch gives it a beauty and delicacy that is more like music.

    Edited on Dec 12, 5:32 because ''.

  • Moonangel49022
    December 12, 2004
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    beautiful very beautiful there are no words to describe it

  • TivioAngel
    December 11, 2004
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    Beautiful write. The flow of this piece is amazing. Muchas amor, Mandy

  • Graybo man
    December 11, 2004
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    Wow impressive i never new so much about Indian life let alone love life

  • myvoke
    December 11, 2004
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    waaow..i no next 2 nothing about the indians or the castor race they practice but your write did open the window into the indian love life

  • Cvillelisa
    December 11, 2004
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    The poetry of the East is so deliciously intense. I can imagine reading this out loud with a lover .. and the last four lines I want to wear.

    I'd like to express thanks to the person promoting these ..

  • krishmat
    December 11, 2004
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    A most well written poem. Sarojini Naidu's piece is indeed a flawless execution of emotive renderings, that suggest a mastery of the poetic vernier that I can only aspire to. There is a clear social backdrop to the poem that draws upon the south asian creed, but I suspect that she may have been inspired no doubt by Shakespears Romeo and Juliet despite the very clear Hindu Muslim chasim of that time "Alike in his ear sound the temple bells / and the cry of the muezzin." Three instances that took me back to R&J - Kiss, grant thy prayer, Profane. Those familiar with the Bards work will note that this is from the scene where they first meet and he beseeches her for a kiss while they dance. There is a lot of detail here. The Veil, Tress, Anklet are common rheotic Indian elements, used in many poems even to this day. Mastery however is displayed in bringing freshness to this. Like writing about a Rose and making it come alive so that you are spellbinded anew. Superb Write Nevertheless.

  • Rose princessoffire
    December 11, 2004
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    A sweet and tender taste of love. Love without profanity. One so special and innocently spoken. Very well done, so much that it has inspired me to write a poem. I love Indian works and the closer to the realiasm the better. It captured a great deal of it here. Thanks for sharing.
    Rose
    Edited on Dec 11, 8:27 because ''.


  • rufina caraid Moderators member
    December 3, 2004
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    This is my first 'taste' of the talent and inner beauty of this lady and will be our featured 'Poet of the Week' from Monday 6th December.
    Her poem has a poignancy about it that heightens ones senses as it continues on until those 4 final, amazing lines.
    ~Von~

  • Unbridled1
    September 15, 2004
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    This is just another fine example of Naidu's ability to create images that completely captivate the reader. Her words are so alive and become almost tangible.


    UB


  • July 9, 2004
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    One of the best poems......

  • nike
    February 19, 2004
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    This was also a first for me. Another Romeo and Juliet type tale. Rivals who fall in love with the hope that their love can conquer all. If it was only that easy.

    Thnak you for bringing this piece to the forefront for all to read and enjoy,

  • Simi
    February 13, 2004
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    wow :cheers" I hadnt read this one of Sarojini before. Iti si so poignant and beautiful.

  • Ava Noire
    June 4, 2003
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    *applauds*

    This poem has such a strong message. I especially liked how each stanza was written as from the viewpoint of the man then the woman.

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