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Consummation Of Grief

I even hear the mountains
the way they laugh
up and down their blue sides
and down in the water
the fish cry
and the water
is their tears.
I listen to the water
on nights I drink away
and the sadness becomes so great
I hear it in my clock
it becomes knobs upon my dresser
it becomes paper on the floor
it becomes a shoehorn
a laundry ticket
it becomes
cigarette smoke
climbing a chapel of dark vines. . .
it matters little
very little love is not so bad
or very little life
what counts
is waiting on walls
I was born for this
I was born to hustle roses down the avenues of the dead.

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  • Quiet mouse
    June 28
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    Alone

    Alone and solitary he was and that he accepted. He was "born for this".

  • Aries
    May 19
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    Brilliant

    Thought provoking insight to life


  • evil tempest
    August 9, 2008
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    muy bien.


  • March 22, 2008
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    From guest yacob Enoch (contact)
    I like the question, "Very little love is not so bad or very little life what counts." Exactly!!! what counts? nothing or everything? It could all just be a matter of posture. body language. physical behavior


  • December 26, 2007
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    From guest Joe Ramsey (contact)
    This is the best description of sadness I've ever read--becoming these objects, and waiting on walls.


  • more like war
    August 31, 2007
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    Absolutely mindblowing.


  • August 4, 2007
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    From guest smriti (contact)
    the last line is just mindblowing