After you left me
I let a dog smell at
My chest and my belly. It will fill its nose
And set out to find you.
I hope it will tear the
Testicles of your lover and bite off his penis
Or at least
Will bring me your stockings between his teeth.
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From guest Sherry (contact)
HAHA.....Now ive heard it all....I thought nothing would shock me ever again..but i was wrong...This is truly one of a kind....But...I have had those sort of feelings before ..hehehe -
Poetic revenge at it's best. A dog after love is certainly not a dog to be messed with. I loved this poem. It says a lot in only a few short lines.
Avril
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A bit of poetic revenge. Expresses the almost murderous first anger felt at the outset of a breakup, but with a sly humor.
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LOL
I need to send this dog after some of my ex's. This was great. What a sense of humor! HA HA
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Ok, this piece was quite different than the other pieces I have read here today. The ending surprised the hell out of me, the beginning I didn't like too much but the ending summed it up for me - obviously.
It's a nice piece, but, I was surprised at the ending I must say.
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very funny - the images are a little gruesome but the passionate feeling behind them is understandable (I think).
Von
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I hope it will tear the
Testicles of your lover and bite off his penis
LMAO!
some funny stuff right there -
Wow, anger?
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LMAO! This is just TOO DAMN FUNNY! I could picture the scene...a man, his dog...and the unsuspecting two-some he is going to find!
It has an almost sardonic tone to this piece...and speaks so conversationally that it is almost a snicker! I loved this one.
UB
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Hahahahaaaaa such passion!
Loved this, great humour. -
Hahahaha. I love this man's sense of humor. Love this piece too. All of it. Title too. lol.
Desiree
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