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Native Companions Dancing


On the blue plains in wintry days
  The stately birds move in the dance.
Keen eyes have they, and quaint old ways
On the blue plains in wintry days.
The Wind, their unseen Piper, plays,
  They strut, salute, retreat, advance;
On the blue plains, in wintry days,
  These stately birds move in the dance

Notes

The Dance of the Brolga - the Australian Crane.
Silver- Grey plumage with naked red patches on their heads and cheeks.

Aboriginal legend says that this bird was once a young girl Brolgah, who was always dancing. by black magic she was changed into a bird.

It is believed that the Brolga's dance has inspired parts of the Aboriginal dance.

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  • November 13, 2007
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    native companions dancin

    From guest Tiffany 12 (contact)
    i think its a nice poem and very one should read it i dobe it for a project

  • mermaid7
    October 15, 2006
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    A perfect little gem. The notes really helped to achieve a fuller understanding of the cultural references in this poem. It's always a joy to learn cultural beliefs, lore and myths. The idea that Brolgah was changed into the beautiful Australian crane is a charming way to telling a story. I really think poems like this can inspire people to get in touch with their country's legends. Isn't it amazing how the "early" or Ancient people told stories to explain their world? The classic tales like The Odyssey, Beowulf, etc., all demonstate the lasting power of a good story.
    Back to this poem, lol. I am curious about the birds dancing on the "wintry days". Does their mating occur only during the winter? Is the Austrialian winter just cold, or is there snow? Just curious. I like the repetition of the blue plain in wintry days.


  • August 21, 2005
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    good

  • Unbridled1
    November 11, 2004
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    Von, thank you for the information on the Brolgas. The picture above the piece is quite helpful as well in being able to actually "see" just what Neilson writes of in this piece. This piece seems to portray a very graceful type of bird...and it tells so well of its form and beauty.


    UB


  • rufina caraid Moderators member
    March 24, 2004
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    Native Companions are Brolgas - a true Australian crane. their silvery-grey plumage is highlighted by red patches on head and cheeks.
    this beautiful descriptive poem highlights the loveliness of these awkward looking birds.
    Von