Meeting is as remote as
cloud-shrouded
thunder rumbles
as do rumours of you
and so my love continues.
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haunting
thunder rumbles
as do rumours of you
bitter sweet , sepration makes the heart grow -
Ki no Tsurayuki, hi the poem does have a nice ring and is a pretty write, but I think I missed your larger point, I guess I may not have my thinking cap on this morning. anyway sorry image and Visions
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Great work! I love the emotions and such...
"thunder rumbles
as do rumours of you
and so my love continues."- I love the last three lines the most... escpecaily the last line... the last line is an interesting twist to the poem... good job.
ahug4me08
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I love it.
Edited on Nov 02, 6:23 because ''.
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