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  • on While I gaze upon it by Ki no Tsurayuki, on February 3, 2005
    well, I have the opposite understanding of andrewhide...Though he is feeling distant..line two he is also reassuring himself that everywhere is a dwelling...so i would take it that he was trying to comfort himself from his feeling of loneliness by trying to compare himself to the moon light which has a dwelling everywhere.... ofcourse only he knows what he meant

  • on A Retort by John Bannister Tabb, on January 21, 2005
    nice one!
    Finger is done!:-)

  • on The Flowers Have Tender Little Souls by Ella Wheeler Wilcox, on January 21, 2005
    Nice piece.. but I think the lines "Each star that on its orbit rolls
    Feels infinite desire. " makes it a little bit less rhymic..... apart from that...perfect!
    Edited on Jan 21, 8:33 because ''.

  • on Children Chapter IV by Khalil Gibran, on January 18, 2005
    Gibran's words transcend time....I was reminded of this piece when I saw some lines of it in a psychology book....

    "The prophet" is the first book of Gibran that I read, and I think most of the writings in there are really breathtaking...

    My favorite lines "They come through you but not from you,
    And though they are with you, yet they belong not to you."

    How I wish my dad read these lines before I was born!