Pastiche

• Last seen on Mar 1 2:40 PM. Member since March 1.
• I am a 21 year old person
• I have 1 comment, 89 poems

My other items

• my birthday present at allpoetry
  Adapted from an old blues song (Sixteen stone) with slight changes...
  
• Letter to an unfaithful husband at allpoetry
  You opened your mouth
  Laying your tongue like the moon over water:
• trick, treat, drink deep at allpoetry
  friends ebb and flow
  travelling this spider web

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• on You Will Hear Thunder by Anna Akhmatova, on March 1

  The poem seems to flow with her unique use of Nature without pastels, the personal tied in with the world around, and the addressing of her work to someone in particular. Stark images set up the grim satisfaction of betrayal repaid.
  I have used this poem as the prompt for the contest, Make them Smile. http://allpoetry.com/contest/2438599