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Paulcreates

  • Last seen on Oct 12 4:28 PM. Member since June 18, 2008.
  • I am a 52 year old person
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  • Not so 'terrible' I should think...

    I want to to assume the "fine young man" was his father.

  • "The door to opportunity often swings on the hinges of adversity."

    Excellent flow and imagery to this one!

  • Ah yes,

    I believe that when we fall,
    we fall into that abyss of wonder -
    that gorgeous mystery of it all,
    'tis that tears and tears us all asunder.

  • The serf would have perhaps preferred a freeing of the mind as well as freeing of the body. I have written a poem similar in meaning to this.