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Phunkypuhnk

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  • I like this poem too. I didn't think I was going to enjoy it understand it. I especially like the lines:
    nature's like that too,
    who tried for beauty times untold
    until she triumphed, and made you.

    It's true you try and try and by the time you succeed you're near your own demise.