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- Walking Through Shadows at allpoetry
Though alive I walk through shadows - Trapped Teardrops at allpoetry
They clog the mind Like dirt in sinks - Alone in my old shuttered home at allpoetry
Alone in my old shuttered home I know the world is dead
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on Do Not Go Gentle Into That Good Night by Dylan Thomas, on April 3, 2006I liked his flow
This was a good villanelle (sp?) one of the first I read. This is a powerful and strong poem
'Light' I feel represents life and 'night' represents death
I think he used iambic pentameter, which I liked (how can you tell if it's an iambic? I can't tell the difference between hard and soft beats
) Was this written to his father when his father was dying?
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on War Girls by Jessie Pope, on March 30, 2006I'm quite indifferent to this poem- my English year 10/11 teacher hated it! But I don't mind the form, I like the rhyme and repetition. However, possibly because of the era it was written in, it seems quite sexist and jingoistic (which cannot be excused by the era, as Owen etc wrote anti-war poetry but could be because she's a 'girl' and didn't go to war)
Anyway, I disliked the message but I did like the style of this write. -
on Little Jack Horner by Anonymous British, on March 29, 2006I'm used to 'eating his christmas pie' and 'what a good boy am I'. Another great one from childhood, which I recommend to parents. Thanks Old Poetry researcher/s who worked on these rhymes for my little nostalgia fest

All the best to the researchers and anyone else who views this write
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