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insidious or assiduous
context for consequences
buttressed for emphasis
book of numbers not just calendar :
of with what plans or worded wads
we can't unfold fooled
in death for equation of soul
but there is another variable for vulnerable
in who goes to teacher and source
of because whether womb or days
of responsibility not just loved
elbow rib and all
as plant could've been pretty
recognized soft not just at one stage
elderberries or eldritch always
though checked versus dithers.

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  • on Tonight I Can Write The Saddest Lines by Pablo Neruda, on September 27

    in conjunction

    maybe a stirring to continue import not just beauty, "To hear the immense night, more immense without her" has emptiness with just maturity now and recollection echoes only "What does it matter that my love couldn't keep her.
    The night is full of stars and she is not with me" with an abridgement of what could've made memories momentum if not rushable to just flood head now --

    simply without right activity "I no longer love her, true, but how much I loved her.
    My voice searched the wind to touch her ear" wrenches readiness at done.

    it reminds me how child's whisper of squirrel has me know creature's proximity not sleepy voice of story teller and delicately I'd like to know not a shout to change it or have to but as woman calmly calls him home is compounded for birth, by no puns or punts of awareness

    but I could kick myself too,
    pre...

  • on Spring is like a perhaps hand by e e cummings, on September 24

    it reminds me of spring cleaning motivation for consistency even in recollection

    oh "perhaps" as optimistic now with obvious to believe in seemlessly or laboriously acquiesce to nice scene as stimulus would have it opening up for

    this brightness on routine, makes one hunker down to okay when it comes but we should have adherence that we've heard it comes around even as a at matrimony's mat woman that could become pregnant... does she just whine of not being able to have as at that hemisphere but it can switch sooner than expected.

    and yet regular succulent nutrition as from soil or feasible releasable nature would've made the welcome more real -- like meeting job for it by bits knowing better or burdensomely back from sadness "moving a perhaps
    fraction of flower here placing
    an inch of air there" so is winter sunk into or strongest towards ~

    schedule for growth not wipeout where other periods peered out,
    carolyn