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- closing time (i haven't titled it yet) at storywrite
Closing time came early. The lights came on, and everyone looked at each other bleary eyed for a moment before pealing themselves off of their barstools and shuffling out
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on Sonnet XVII: I do not love you as if you were brine-rose, topaz by Pablo Neruda, on September 20, 2004Neruda speaks so clearly. There is no pretense of grandure or thickness of image or allusion. He speaks what is and with him that is beautiful.
DAMN BEAUTIFUL!
give me more.
now.
do as i say.
interesting
i love the change in narrative...