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- Funeral Speach : Part 1 at storywrite
"He looks so peaceful."
"He looks like he lost some weight."
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on Bored And Sad by Mikhail Yuryevich Lermontov, on January 19, 2004
Depressing
It seems dark and never able to settle on anything. The person isn't able to have anything it wants. the line 'To love...but love whom?.. a short love is vexing' is jsut creepy how beutiful and true it is. the line 'Desires!...What use is our vain and eternal desire?..' holds ture so much in life. I love the puntuation.
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on Sibyl by John Howard Payne, on January 19, 2004
Amazing
You fill it with such sounds sights smells and feeling it almost jumps of the page. I read it 3 times and i can't wait to read it again. Great work, I am looking at your other stuff. -
on Before A Little Coffin by Marina Ivanova Tsvetaeva, on January 19, 2004
Awsome
I like the way that you split it up into the sections, you have each one be about a different topic. 'a round comb is no longer pressing' is just such a good line it is sick. I don't quite get the end.
Love
It is very clear and I could tell It is really speaking from their heart. The second time I read it I noticed the Beat in it. wonderful poem, I would be honored if I was able to read it to the one I love with the pasion it desserves.