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on A Child's Amaze by Walt Whitman, on February 11, 2006Reminiscing to the moments past, Walt Whitman wrote this piece with such strength and beauty. There is imagery, a sense of actually being the person feeling such emotions, and the lingering feeling of wanting to hear more. I am so sorry to say that this is the first of Walt's pieces that I have ever read, though I am glad that I have. May his writings be remembered through history and be brought to life through AllPoetry!
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on Tobacco by George Wither, on September 27, 2005i thought it was ok
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on A Dog Has Died by Pablo Neruda, on July 29, 2005Simplicity in sadness is expressed through this poem! Pablo, this is the first poem of yours that I have read. It is really good and full of talent! I am sorry for the loss of your dog! I lost my dog when I was in 6th grade! He was hit by a truck(my dad's)....I wrote a poem in dedication to him and cried the whole time that I typed it up! My horse died the next year of a heart attack. I cried like crazy while writing his poem, and my cat ran away, probably dead, the year before my dog did. She was the sweetest! I wish you the best in the future! Good luck in writing, and I want you to know that your dog loved you very much and showed you its loyalty through the years! You are so lucky to have such an honorable pet!
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This piece was so beautiful. The imagery, descriptiveness, and flow of Pablo's excellently chosen words were fantastic. It is really terrible indeed, that we must miss this poet so talented, but at least his poetry lies in the archives, ready to be revealed to hungry eyes.