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A poem curls in the spine of a boy who’s finally shut up, sitting in the dirt, bent over his clipboard.
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on o sweet spontaneous by e e cummings, on May 30, 2004Philosophy and science and religion all lay their meanings on what just is.
That's my take on it, anyhow. -
on in just- by e e cummings, on May 30, 2004ya gotta wonder about that balloonman, goat-footed and all....
I loved this poem, along with everything else by cummngs, when I was 14. I tried to write like him! HA!
perhaps this is a metaphor for sexual awakening, I don't know. -
on Cut Grass by Philip Larkin, on May 30, 2004I just have to do this:
Long, long the death it dies
in the white hours of young-leafed June
with chestnut flowers,
with hedges snowlike strewn, white lilac bowed,
lost lanes of Queen Anne's lace,
and that high-builded cloud moving at summer's pace.
because I wanted to see what it would read like if taken out of the rhyming quatrain form. What's delightful about poetry like this is that you have to read it twice, at least, once to ride the rhymes and once to catch the meaning. Larking achieves his effect with masterful use of enjambement.
I don't know why he moves from 4 syllable lines to 6 syllable lines; maybe someone else out there will figure that out. I would think that a poet of his skill did this as a conscious choice, not by accident.

I know Nin mostly from her diaries and from her letters to Henry Miller. Her letters...in the electronic age, these would not have survived. I wonder how much literature will never be found in the email age.
Hmm.